The Chosen One Diaries

This is a mock book cover for this wacky thing that I'm planning on writing Someday, called the Chosen One Diaries. It's a fantasy novel in the form of a teenage girl's diary--a la The Princess Diaries, or the Georgia Nicholson books. The mousy girl who writes in her journal a lot is chosen to Defeat the Ultimate Evil while trying to survive magic high school at the same time. Kind of like if Harry Potter had kept a diary, except with less capslock.

I tried lighter brown lines with this one--what do you think?